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Write about the following topic: Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Other say these are the not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays,
people
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 are encouraged to be able to communicate in
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. In
this
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 case,
people
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 can have an opportunity to go abroad for travelling and working in there.
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, there are other aspects of why the language is learnt. In
this
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, some
people
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 who are learning
English
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 have a desire to be able to
work
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 in another
country
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. They realize that the foreign
country
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 would give them much more salary than their own
country
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. Apart from that, there is a new
experience
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 from working abroad where they could find different
conditions
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 in any aspect which is valuable for them.
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,
people
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 who have an opportunity to
work
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 in Europe will have an
experience
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 in winter
conditions
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. It can be shared with their family in their homeland as a pride. On the one
hand
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, some
people
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 who are learning
English
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 have a desire to be able to
work
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 in another
country
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. They realize that the foreign
country
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 would give them much more salary than their own
country
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. Apart from that, there is a new
experience
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 from working abroad where they could find different
conditions
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 in any aspect which is valuable for them.
For example
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,
people
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 who have an opportunity to
work
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 in Europe will have an
experience
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 in winter
conditions
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. It can be shared
to
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 their family in their homeland as a pride.
On the other
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hand
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, learning
English
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 is not only for going abroad but
also
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 for those who want to be
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English
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teacher
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 is a must. They study
English
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 at the university level to improve their skill in order to be implemented later as a
teacher
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. They realize
English
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 teaching
as
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 a good profession and many
people
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 look for it, particularly non-native
English
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 countries.
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, many courses are available in my city and many parents enrol their children there.
On the other
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hand
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, learning
English
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 is not only for going abroad but
also
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 for those who want to be
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English
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an English
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teacher
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 is a must. They study
English
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 at the university level to improve their skill in order to be implemented later as a
teacher
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. They realize
English
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 teaching
as
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is
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 a good profession and many
people
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 look for it, particularly non-native
English
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 countries.
For instance
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, many courses are available in my city and many parents enrol their children there. In conclusion,
people
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 who are learning
English
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 can have different purposes both for going abroad and being a
teacher
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.
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