An increasing number of doctors and professors are leaving their poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does it cause and what are the solutions.

For decades, the Immigration of consultants is being increased all around the world as time goes by. Fewer and fewer doctors are enthusiastic to remain in their poverty territories. In

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and propose some solutions appropriately.

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, the majority of ill communities suffer from inadequate welfare services because of the

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number of surgeons who head overseas so there is

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small array of

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available in hospitals. As proven by statistics, sick nations have to wait for months to see consultants ;

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, people are wretched with

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undesirable condition. A solution is for the government to attract consultants to remain in their own country by way of incentive schemes

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as increasing their salaries, implementing incentive schemes and

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, more professors would consider

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services in their own lands.

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, a growing number of folks ponder that the sharp increase

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Immigration has

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influence on young generations who had considered

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Medicine at university owing to the negative insights of doctors' working conditions;

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, clever youths become reluctant to choose

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field;

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, one out of every twenty university students opt for

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major. To tackle

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problem, the power ought to launch a campaign to tempt young doctors

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young students to help their own communities. In conclusion,

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professors are

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,there are a variety of changing actions that should be taken immediately to make these valuable professions

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remain in their own lands and give services to their own inhabitants.