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The bar chart gives information about the proportion of children, men and women eating fruit and vegetables daily in the United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008.

The bar chart gives information about the proportion of children, men and women eating fruit and vegetables daily in the United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008.
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The bar chart gives information about the proportion of
children
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,
men
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 and
women
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 eating
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 daily in the United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008.
Overall
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, it is obvious that the
percentage
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 of people who ate
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 each
day
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 was gradual growth. In 2006, the
figure
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 for
men
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 and
women
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 hit the highest and the
percentage
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 of
men
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 was higher than that of
children
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 and
women
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 who consume
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 every
day
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 in the UK. In 2001, the proportion of
children
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 and
men
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 who ate
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 per
day
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 stood at 13% and 17% in comparison with 21%that for
men
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. Until 2 years, the
percentage
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 of
children
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 and
men
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 remained stable
while
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 there was a steady increase in the
figure
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 for
women
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 of 6%. In 2006, both
children
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,
men
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 and
women
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 who consume
fruit
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 and
vegetables
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 daily rose sharply. The
percentage
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 of
women
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 and
offsring
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offspring
offering
reached a peak of 35% in 2006 and 27% in 2006 and 2007 whilst the
figure
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 for
men
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 hit the highest point of 26% in 2007. There was a slight fall in the proportion of
women
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 and
men
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 eating
fruit
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 and
vegtables
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vegetables
per
day
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 in the UK over a
2 year
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2-year
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 period
while
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 that of
children
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 went up gradually. In 2008 saw a slight decline
35
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of 35
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% and 26% in the
figure
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 for
the
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apply
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women
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 and
men
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, which was 2% higher than that
of
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for
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children
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words children, men, women, fruit, vegetables, percentage, day, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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