The given chart below illustrates the proportion of individuals of 4 kinds age groups who watched in movie theater in one national European between 2000 and 2011.
The given chart below illustrates the proportion of individuals of 4 kinds age groups who watched in
movie
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a movie
the movie
theater
in one national European between 2000 and 2011. Change the spelling
theatre
Overall
, it can be seen that there was an uptrend in all four groups during
11 Change preposition
over
years
. In addition
, there were more people in
aged 15-24 is the highest Change preposition
apply
group
in over 11 years
.
Regarding to
Remove the preposition
apply
group
aged 15-24 has
roughly 15% in the first year, Unnecessary verb
apply
group
aged 35 and over a mere 2%. In the next few Correct article usage
the group
years
, aged
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the aged
group
15-24 was
rose dramatically to 35% in 2006 and Unnecessary verb
apply
had
fluctuated noticeably before Unnecessary verb
apply
stand
at over 50% in the Wrong verb form
standing
last
year. Meanwhile, the group
35-over had slightly increase
to over 10% in over 11 Change the verb form
increased
years
.
In terms of people aged 7-14 had
10% came Unnecessary verb
apply
ton
cinema in the first year, which was twice higher than the percentage of 25-35 viewers. During the given period, a similar pattern was witnessed in both groups Correct your spelling
to
fluctuated
considerably and both stopped at 30% in 2011.Wrong verb form
fluctuating
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