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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The above table provides information about the distance of routes, the number of
passengers
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 annually
as well as
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 the opening dates of
railway
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 systems in six different cities.
Overall
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, it is apparent that the three older railroad systems (London, Paris and Tokyo) have longer routes and more
passengers
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 yearly than the newer ones(Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles). London has the oldest and longest underground
railway
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 system among 6 cities, opening in 1863 with a length of 394 kilometres. Its number of
passengers
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 per year,
however
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, is the lowest compared to the other two oldest
railway
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 systems in Paris and Tokyo, showing only 775 million annually.
Although
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 the railroad system of Tokyo was opened approximately 60 years later than London’s, it has the largest amount of
passengers
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 at 1927 million per year, doubling the sum of
passengers
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 in Paris (1191 million). In terms of the
railway
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 opened after 1970, Washington DC has a route of 125 kilometres, longer than the ones in Kyoto and Los Angeles which account for 11 and 28 kilometres respectively.
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, Kyoto has the least
passengers
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 in a year, about one-third of Washington DC’s.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words passengers, railway with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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