The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.

The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.
The chart illustrates the average
price
of monthly plans from four cell phone contractors in a European nation in the first three quarters of 2002.
Overall
, there was an increase in the figures for all companies, except for Sim TX whose
price
remained unchanged over the period shown.
In addition
, the monthly cost of Alpha’s contract experienced the most remarkable growth. Alpha originally offered the lowest
price
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the beginning of 2002 at only 5
euros
per month. The
price
remained relatively stable during the next 5 months before a surge to 25
euros
in September, which made Alpha the most expensive contractor examined. Meanwhile, Domo’s users had to pay the highest
price
for the majority of 2002 as the
price
rose gradually from January to July, followed by a slight decrease to about 23
euros
by September.
Similarly
, there was
gradual
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growth in the
price
of Lex’s contract, from approximately 12
euros
in January to 17
euros
in September.
On the other hand
, after peaking at 14
euros
in June, the average cost of Sim TX decreased and returned to its original
price
of 8
euros
.
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