Some people think that parents should limit their children’s time to watch TV and play computer games and encourage them to read books. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by groups of people that parents should only give limited time to their
children
to activities
such
as watching TV and playing virtual
games
. Parents
also
need to make their
children
read
books
. I completely agree with
this
statement, because TV and computer
games
are just addictive wastes of time. And
books
can give a lot of advantages to our kids. When we are limiting our kids from computer
games
, we are making them less addicted to
such
things.
For example
, millions of teenagers have already spent more than thousands of hours playing a video game called Counter-Strike.
That is
Because
this
game is specially designed to stimulate our dopamine receptors, so we want to spend more time looking at the screen. It is very bad for our brain systems. Recent studies have shown that
this
sort of addiction makes us more depressed, and sad, and even may lead to suicide.
Instead
, we can give our
children
books
to read. Reading can make them better in every aspect of our life.
In other words
, they can gain a lot of knowledge from
books
, especially, if they are reading the self-improvement genre. One clear example is a book called "Atomic Habits". By reading it, people always get motivated to do productive things. It helps us organize our days and make our habits useful. Even successful celebrities and authorities recommend reading
this
book. Recently youtube influencer with the nickname "Eoneguy" published a video, where he says that
this
book is extremely useful for everyone. In conclusion, we have to set a limit for our
children
to watch TV shows or play computer
games
.
Instead
, it is much better to make them read. So they can develop themselves.
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