Some people say it is important to keep your home and work place tidy with everything organized and in the correct places. What is your opinion about it?
According to
some people, organizing things
and keeping them in the right
place
both at home and in the office is important. I agree with this
opinion to a certain extent, but I also
feel that there is no need to keep something that is
used often in the correct place
.
On the one hand, keeping our home and workplace neat and tidy will make us feel comfortable,
because messy surroundings distress and distract people. Remove the comma
apply
Moreover
, if things
are not kept in their right
place
, we will have to waste a lot of time looking for them. For example
, many people can recount at least one occasion when they had to spend hours searching for their keys. Had they kept the keys in their right
place
, they could have saved a lot of time and trouble. Likewise
, if important financial and health documents are not kept in the right
place
, the consequences can be disastrous. In the event of a medical emergency, no one can waste time looking for an important report or prescription. Obviously, there are several benefits to keeping things
organized.
On the other hand
, not everything has to be kept in its right
place
at all times. Actually, when it comes to things
we use frequently, keeping them in a place
where we can find them easily is more important than keeping them in their proper place
. For example
, I enjoy reading. Once I have taken a book from my bookshelf, I put it back only after I have finished reading it. Until then
I leave it on my table or on my bed. I find nothing wrong with this
arrangement because as long as I can find the book easily, I do not care whether it is in its right
place
or not.
To conclude
, I believe that it is important to keep most things
organized and in the correct place
because organization makes it easy to find them. However
, certain things
that we use often do not have to be in the right
place
at all times.Submitted by adinaabdukerim150 on
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