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country from 1987 to 2007.Overseas visitors to three different areas show 3

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(the coasts

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recipient area between 1987 and 2007(exactly in 1987 was 40

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accepted

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visitors in 1987. The

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that two areas(the

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decreased to 35 but

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lakes

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dramatically increase to 75

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to 75

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2007.

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