The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.

The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.
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The bare graph given displays the
amount
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of money spent in
percentage
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the percentage
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of Gross Domestic Products on the
health
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sector in European countries in the
years
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2002, 2007 and 2012.
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,
Switzerland
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,
Belgium
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and Spain spent the same
amount
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of money on
health
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in all the given
years
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. On the hand, Estonia invested the least in
health
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.
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, France was the highest spender in the
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2007. In 2002,
Switzerland
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spent the most on
health
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with about 11% of
GDP
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. Out of the remaining 11 countries,
Belgium
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, France and Netherlands spent the same
amount
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of capital on the
health
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of 10% of
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. Estonia that
year
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spent the least of about 3% in
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. The
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2007 was a good
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for France as it shows that the country invested about 11.5% in
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in
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which was by far the highest spent by any country so far.
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,
Belgium
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and
Switzerland
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spent the same
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spent in 2002 and Estonia still had the least investment in
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in 2007 and
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the same as the previous
year
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. In 2012, Norway and Denmark increased their rate of expenses on
health
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by 1% in
GDP
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from the previous
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which was stationed at 9%.
Switzerland
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and
Belgium
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again spent the same capital as in previous
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and Slovenia increased the expenses by 1% in
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compared to the usual spending limit of 8% in
GDP
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, health, years, switzerland, belgium, year, gdp with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Health expenditure
  • Percentage of GDP
  • Trend analysis
  • Economic prosperity
  • Health outcomes
  • Quality of healthcare
  • Allocation of resources
  • Healthcare services
  • Political, social, and economic factors
  • International organizations
  • Government policies
  • Predictive trends
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