The chart below shows the change in three different types of crime in Newport city center from 2003 to 2012
The line graphs illustrate the differences
of
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in
crime
rates in Newport city center
during the nine years. Change the spelling
centre
Overall
, it is clear that
the bulgrary
showed a decrease, Correct your spelling
burglary
budgetary
while
the number of robbery
and car theft fluctuated between 2003 and 2012.
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robberies
To begin
, the bulgrary
was the majority Correct your spelling
burglary
crime
in 2003, accounted
for just below 3500 Wrong verb form
accounting
incidents
. It rose to reach a peak at around 3700 incidents
in 2004 and suddenly dropped to its low at just over 1000 in 2008. Furthermore
, it increased again in 2009 and remained stable during the next three years.
On the other hand
, the car theft and robbery trend experienced fluctuation over a period. The number of criminals who steal a car were
nearly 2700 Change the verb form
was
incidents
in 2003, falling slightly until 2005 and having fluctuation for six years although
surpassing the bulgrary
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burglary
crime
since 2006. It reached the same number as in beginning
year and became the main Correct article usage
the beginning
crime
in Newport city center
. Change the spelling
centre
Moreover
, robbery crime
also
depicted the
oscillation during Correct article usage
an
this
period when it started at 500 incidents
in 2003 and reached at
just over 500 in the final year.Change preposition
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