There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter introduce yourself explain what the problem is tell the councilor what you would like to be done

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Hello Sir, My name is Preetpal Singh, I am working in news channel 05. I am writing

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letter for a sharp turn on the

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near my house.

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turn is a very sharp turn and the most dangerous thing about

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is, it is at the very end of the downhill

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which causes an increase in the speed of vehicles.

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, there is not any board nearby which makes the driver know early about it.

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, the

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is narrow which does not allow drivers to take action to make space for other vehicles. Since there are children living around

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area and makes me very unsafe for them.

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, there are some ways from my side to get rid of it .

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, there should be some board on the

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to notify or alert drivers to take action or be aware before it.

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, roads should be wider to people make choices to move their vehicles easily.

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, there should be a stop sign

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of the curve so people can wait or decide before turning. Thanks for understanding. Sincerely, Thanks

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

188 words

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There is a problem in the road outside your house. Write a letter to your local councilor. In your letter introduce yourself explain what the problem is tell the councilor what you would like to be done

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many people think that museums and galleries should only show work from local artists rather than work from other countries. Do you agree?

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

You recently stayed at a hotel conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include • Where you stayed • What the problems were • How they can fix your complaint.

Some people think that large international sporting events only brings drawbacks, and that it is not worth hosting them. Do you agree or disagree?