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Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A number of young
adults
 decide to take a
year
 gap between finishing
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education
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 in Senior high
school
 and applying to
university
 in order to get skills in the workplace or become travellers. I believe that statements can bring drawbacks and benefit to youngster life. On the one hand, there are several disadvantages to taking a
year
 out between finishing
school
 and starting a
university
.
Firstly
, young people will lose interest to continue their studies because they tend to feel comfortable with their jobs.
For instance
, my friend after he graduated from senior high
school
 he decided to
work
 as a temporary employee in a government office. After a
year
 of working as a temporary ,employee he did not want to continue his study because he thought he could earn money to fulfil his primary needs without gaining an education in
university
.
Furthermore
, nowadays the
work
 world becoming more competitive. As long as we know, the aim of education is to
gain
 a better job. If several young
adults
 spent a
year
 gaining
experience
 from
work
 or
travel
while
 others continue their education. Students who pursue their studies will
gain
 opportunities to
gain
 their dreams and find better jobs.
On the other hand
, there is an advantage when young
adults
 decide to take a
year
 gap in order to
gain
work
experience
 or
travel
. Young people become more independent because they
gain
 a lot of
experience
 when their
work
 or
travel
.
For example
, when young
adults
 were in senior high
school
 they lived under their parent's protection.
Therefore
, if their face a problem their relatives will help and give advice to them. Meanwhile, when they
work
 or
travel
 alone and face any problem they can learn to deal with it.
To conclude
,
although
 taking one
year
 out between finishing
school
 and joining
university
 for gaining
work
 or
travel
experience
 can benefit young people, I consider that the drawback can outweigh the benefit.
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