The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced
The given diagram depicts the whole production process of
dairy
goods.
Overall
, there is an 8-step process which starts with cows grazing and ends by displaying dairy
products at stores.
Firstly
, Cows needed to be fed properly, mostly by grass. Secondly
, due to
the productive nature of cows, they should be milked twice every day by milking machines. Afterwards, milk
will be shipped to the dairy
centre by tankers, because this
step might be time-consuming before milk
goes bad it would be stored in special refrigerators prior to its shipment.
In order that milk
becomes a usable product, it would be processed in the dairy
centre. While
some of the milk
is pasteurized and bottled for consumer usage, the rest would be made into other dairy
products like cheese, cream, and butter. Finally
, all be packaged and shipped to supermarkets and shops for consumers to use.
To summarize, these few steps need to be taken in order to produce dairy
goods from raw milk
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