The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now

The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now
The map illustrates how the given park has been changed from 1980 up to now.
Overall
, the pond, bench and trees have stayed almost the same.
In addition
, the streets have been expanded and the flower area has been replaced with a bush and playground. First of all, in 1980 the park had two gates, trees in the northeast, a few flowers in the southeast and southwest and a pond which was surrounded by three benches.
On the other hand
, the park now is different. There are some specific areas that have been changed completely
while
other spaces are changed a little.
for instance
, The trees area has changed to absorb the barbeque area that consists of chairs and desks. Flowers in the southeast have been replaced by playgrounds. Whilst the ones in the southwest exchanged with bush. The bench number is increased, and the gates have been removed. Eventually,
instead
of an L-shaped road two intersecting streets have been added.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformed
  • expanded
  • renovated
  • upgraded
  • revamped
  • refurbished
  • install
  • addition
  • increase
  • enhance
  • improve
  • introduce
  • upgrade
  • create
  • development
  • facilities
  • recreational areas
  • wildlife habitats
  • pathways
  • walkways
  • seating areas
  • lighting arrangements
  • ponds
  • lakes
  • sports facilities
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