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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
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The charts
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Korea
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,
Sweden
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 and the UK in terms of the methods used in each country to dispose of harmful
waste
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.
It is clear that
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 in both the UK and
Sweden
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, the majority of dangerous
waste
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 products are buried underground.
By contrast
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, most hazardous materials in the Republic of
Korea
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 are recycled. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 82% of the UK’s dangerous
waste
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 is put into landfill sites.
This
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 disposal technique is used for 55% of the hazardous
waste
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 in
Sweden
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 and only 22% of similar
waste
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 in
Korea
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. The latter country recycles 69% of hazardous materials, which is far more than the other two nations.
While
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 25% of
Sweden
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's harmful
waste
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 is recycled, the UK does not recycle at all.
Instead
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, it dumps
waste
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 at sea or treats it chemically. These two methods are not employed in
Korea
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 or
Sweden
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, which favour incineration for 9% and 20% of dangerous
waste
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 respectively.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words korea, sweden, waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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