The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
The charts
compares
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compare
Korea
, Use synonyms
Sweden
and the UK in terms of the methods used in each country to dispose of harmful Use synonyms
waste
.
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It is clear that
in both the UK and Linking Words
Sweden
, the majority of dangerous Use synonyms
waste
products are buried underground. Use synonyms
By contrast
, most hazardous materials in the Republic of Linking Words
Korea
are recycled.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 82% of the UK’s dangerous Use synonyms
waste
is put into landfill sites. Use synonyms
This
disposal technique is used for 55% of the hazardous Linking Words
waste
in Use synonyms
Sweden
and only 22% of similar Use synonyms
waste
in Use synonyms
Korea
. The latter country recycles 69% of hazardous materials, which is far more than the other two nations.
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While
25% of Linking Words
Sweden
's harmful Use synonyms
waste
is recycled, the UK does not recycle at all. Use synonyms
Instead
, it dumps Linking Words
waste
at sea or treats it chemically. These two methods are not employed in Use synonyms
Korea
or Use synonyms
Sweden
, which favour incineration for 9% and 20% of dangerous Use synonyms
waste
respectively.Use synonyms
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