Nowadays, instead of locally sourced produce, many supermarkets sell a variety of foods imported from countries all across the world. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present day, transportations are much faster and cheaper than before. Versatile imported

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from various nations all over the world are sold and replaced the

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which originated by locals in many supermarkets.

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outweighs

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the drawbacks.

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with, versatile

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which are sold in department stores increase

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choices for selecting based on their preferences.

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, eating foreign nation

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assist in cultural exchanges between countries as culture is expressed by their living through

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, Winter in Korea is very cold

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, Korean people cook Bimbimbab which is served in a hot bowl to keep warming.

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, some nations’

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support food allergic people,

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the local is unable to perform.

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, my friend who is gluten allergic used to buy products from Europe and the United States as local

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no gluten-avoiding products. Despite these advantages,

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on importing

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have a drawback.

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is because the domestic income is decreased

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the number of local products sold are declined.

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, when the demands are dropped,

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the supply

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reduced as well which affects the

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revenues of certain families especially farmers or agricultures who play main roles in producing local goods which leads to the economic and poverty issues of the nation. In conclusion,

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can be adventurous and beneficial if the number of imported goods is balanced with the number of local

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sold in the markets.

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, I believe that the advantages of

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phenomenon outweigh its disadvantages.