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You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend.  In your letter:  • explain why you will be visiting the town - For a business purpose for 5 days. • give details of where you will be staying - Fair Stone Hotel located in the centre of Downtown along with my five colleagues. • ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment. - As much as I am exicted to visit the city I do need recommnedations to spend my evenings well as well as would like to do some outdoor activities.

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Dear Dhruvi, I hope that you are doing well and enjoying your new life in Toronto. Guess where I am going in the next month? I am going to Kitchener! And that's the reason, I am writing you
this
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 letter to seek some information about the
city
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. First and
formost
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foremost
for most
, I have recently joined Apple as a Design Engineer, as a part of my training in the manufacturing facility located in
the
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apply
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Kitchener
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city
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City
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, I will be staying there for five days.
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 that, on the
last
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day
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day,
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 I will
also
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 have an opportunity to meet the
city
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's mayor in the
City
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 Hall.
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, I have decided to get
the
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accommodation in the centre of downtown, in the Fair Stone Hotel.
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, the company will
also
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 provide me with a rental car for travelling
purpose
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purposes
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. As much as I am excited to live in the area, I do need some recommendations to spend my evenings well.
Lastly
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, If you could include some outdoor activities, which will blow my mind and create unforgettable memories
then
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 I will be eternally grateful. Thank you for
help
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your help
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 in advance. Warm regards, Ruchin Patel

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language use
Make sure to proofread for minor spelling errors to enhance your writing.
organization
Ensure each paragraph contains a single idea for clearer organization.
content
The letter includes all necessary details, such as the purpose of the visit and accommodation plans.
language use
The tone is friendly and appropriate for addressing a friend.
cohesion
Ideas flow logically from one to another, making the letter easy to follow.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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