Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to local council. In your letter Give details how you and your friends or family use the centre Explain why the sport and leisure centre is important for the local community Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Dear Sir, I am Kiran,a resident of Brampton,Ontario.I am writing
this
letter to express my concern regarding the decision of shutting down the sports centre in our area. To commence with,I am part of
this
sports centre since 2005.
This
is a great place for children as they can enjoy distinct games in their spare time.I always prefer to do my yoga and exercise here.
Moreover
,elderly people come for a walk on a daily basis.
This
centre is being used by people of all
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age groups as per their needs. Sir,the closure of
this
building will
definately
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affect the children as there will be no place left for them to play.They will get stuck with their video games only.People will be unable to come from their houses.So
i
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would appreciate
if
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this
decision should be stopped. Hope to hear a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Kiran
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