Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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to be protected and well-treated.

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cruelty has become a serious threat

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there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society believes that

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animal

experiments

should be banned.

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emphasize that vital scientific discoveries can be possible from animal

experiments

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will examine connected facts for both views. On the constructive part.society is blessed with medical

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possible via

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cows helped to end smallpox.

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studies on monkeys,dogs and mice led to the polio vaccine.

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considered fatal and took the lives of 20000 Americans annually.today kidney disease can be

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and managed for a long happy life.to

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point those suffering from

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kidney failure must receive dialysis a few times a week to remove toxins from the blood.the invention of dialysis would not have been possible without dogs because they were the first

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dialysis was tested with.

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,surgical procedures,pain

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all have been developed and tested in

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before being used in humans. On the destructive part.there

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of

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animal

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tests are so

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.the National Institute of Health(NIH) has noticed that 95% of all drugs that are shown to be

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and effective in animal fails in human.because they

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work or are dangerous.

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each year inside British Laboratories around 3

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animals

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every 8 seconds,one

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dies.which is not justifiable.

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various technological advances allow the replacement of animal tests

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as cell culture,bioengineered organs,stem

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technology,

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and

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models. In

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I would say

animals

should be used in

experiments

with great caution.

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of these can provide effective and

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results.