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many students take part time jobs while studying in university, you think it's a good idea or bad idea

#students #part #time #jobs #university #idea
Having a
sidejob
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side job
side-job
while
 being a college student is in my opinion a very good idea. One of the values
this
 can bring you apart from money is an expanded social circle, which is very valuable during college years. A
partime
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part-time
 job during
univeristy
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university
,
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 can help
students
 out financially since being a student brings a lot of costs, and not all
students
 or
student's
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 families are able to afford
this
.
For instance
 there are
students
 who move from
third world
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 countries to more wealthy countries, in those cases it can be very hard to pay for everything and readjust the budget.
Furthermore
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while
 you work you have the
change
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chance
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 to meet new people and
enage
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engage
 in new activities.
For
example
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 international
students
, usually
dont
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don't
 know people in the place
the
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 go to study, and during
univeristy
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university
 it can be quite hard to make friends, so
this
 is a great opportunity for them to engage with new people. In
conclusion
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 I
belive
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believe
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 having a
partime
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part-time
 job during university is a great idea. It brings a lot of value to the
students
 in many aspects,
inlcluding
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including
 financial aid,
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more expanded social circle, among others.
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