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Some people believe that We should go for UGRAD other says not. What is your opinion?

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Looking at the task below, which is concerning the idea to introduce one semester of UGRAD in the
life
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 of each student, from any single part of the world, it's evident the way in which two wide views give the opportunity to think and declare a proper opinion about it.
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 with, the first view is related to those who sustain and agree with the thought to let any single student have an extra education course in their
life
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, it's important to evaluate any circumstances, to get the reasons why most of them find a positive side, rather than who disapproved.
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, for those for whom the future is the focal point of their
life
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, having "extra" in
life
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 is always something that brings positive consequences,
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 as experiences , high education level, job opportunities and skills. In comparison, there is the part of those who don't agree with any reason to take part in UGRAD. As has already been mentioned, the motivations can be many and one clear example can be that they are not ambitious at all. They are happy to live a regular
life
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, without dreams and without the passion to find something better for their future; Here it is the reasons why they don't pay too much attention to what in
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 can be a plus. From my personal experience, after having considered and compared several factors connected with the two opposite opinions, I declare to agree with those who, in their existence are constantly looking for something new, that will let them grow, improve and challenge themselves. Because for me,
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, there is nothing better than discovering yourself every day, and the only way to do it is to attempt particular situations, that will increase your potential, second by second. I'm conclusion with what has been already analysed, it's crucial to highlight the importance of the instruction because nowadays is better to have more than less.
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