The charts below show the most popular courses by admissions at UK universities in 2007 and 2014.

The charts below show the most popular courses by admissions at UK universities in 2007 and 2014.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the most popular courses by admissions at UK universities in 2007 and 2014.
The given bar charts illustrate information about the six most
popluar
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popular
courses
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at the universities in the UK by admissions between 2007 and 2014.
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, the number of admissions in all
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showed
a
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upward trend and
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the Nursing
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course
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had the most dramatic change in the figure.
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the beginning,
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the Law
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course
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was the most popular choice among all
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at about 90,000.
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,
psychology
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the psychology
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course
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was
second ranked
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and it had just 10,000 fewer than
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the Law
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course
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in 2007. Pre-clinical medicine and Design
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showed
same
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a same
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number of
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figure
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figures
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for
approximatley
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approximately
70,000 students enrolled. After seven years, the situation changed quite notably. The biggest change was in
Nursing
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the Nursing
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course
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that
it
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grew almost fourfold
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240,000 over time and became the most popular
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in 2014. The number of Computer science
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course
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courses
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increased
almost
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50% from 50,000 to 75,000,
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, it
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the least popular in over two years.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words courses, course with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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