The charts show fresh fruit exports in 2010.

The chart represents the fruit exports in different countries in 2010.

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, for oranges the value in metric tons for the United States was 700, 1000 for South Africa, Egypt stood at almost 900 and made South Africa a clear winner. In the case of grapefruits, the USA stood at 230, same for South Africa and Turkey had the metric at 170. In the previous cases mentioned, there was less

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variance among all. For lemons, Turkey had 500 metric tons, 450 for Mexico and Argentina 250 which made it the least.

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, in terms of other citrus fruits, the number for Mexico was 450 but for the USA and Israel, it was the same which was very minuscule and stood at 1.

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, based on data, the highest export was for the oranges when compared across all categories.

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Jun 16, 2023

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