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56. More and more plastic is polluting cities, countrywide and oceans in the world. What are the problems caused by plastic wastes? What measures should be taken to solve it?

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Nowadays,
plastics
 are widely used to wrap products sold in stores and bring groceries.
However
, the litter is giving negative impacts on the environment since it will not be unravelled easily.
Thus
, there should be some follow-up actions to decrease these drawbacks.
Plastics
 that are widely consumed can not be instantly diminished only by throwing them into the sea or placing it in a landfill. It will eventually fill up the places, both on land and water. Even so, people still decided to use
plastic
 in the first place because it is easier to use and process compared to other materials.
Moreover
, there is a lack of knowledge among the public about
plastic
 pollution which is utterly important to be aware of.
Therefore
, the government should make policies to reduce the utilization of
plastics
 so that companies will think twice whenever they going to choose
plastics
 as their raw material.
Secondly
, the
plastic
 bags that are already stored in the landfill must be recycled into another item. It can be done by crushing the
plastic
 waste and shaping it into clothes, pencils, or bags.
Furthermore
, society must be educated enough to be aware of these problems by holding campaigns and advertisements.
To conclude
,
plastic
 wastes are extremely harmful to the earth. Unfortunately, there are many people who do not understand
this
 problem and companies keep using it for their materials
due to
 insufficient corporate social responsibility. To solve these problems, policies on the limitation of
plastic
 waste utilization should be implemented, recycling the past waste,
as well as
 raising public awareness.
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