In many countries, children in remote villages and communities have no access to education. some people believe that the best solution will be provide teacher and schools. others think that providing computer and internet in these areas will be a better solution. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that there are numerous

children

in rural areas who lack education in certain nations.

While

some individuals believe that providing

teachers

and schools in these areas will be the best method.

Conversely

, there are those people who believe that a better solution is to provide technology tools including computers and the

Internet

.

This

essay will elaborate on both points of view

along with

my perspective.

To begin

with, schools and

teachers

are the basis of studying as the majority of

students

in the world go to school, and

study

with their

teachers

.

Teachers

' duties are not only teaching knowledge to their

students

but

also

taking care,

and

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giving advice to them when they are facing problems.

Moreover

,

study

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when studying

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at school,

students

will meet with different kinds of people

such

as friends,

teachers

, and other

students

' parents,

thus

when they grow up they will be able to adapt to

live

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in real society.

On the other hand

, providing computers and

internet

to

children

in rural areas may cause disadvantages. Since these

children

lack knowledge ,

therefore

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they might use technology in an unbeneficial way if there is no one who

guides

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them.

While

the

internet

has various educational contents which

students

can access and

study

to increase their knowledge, contents on the

internet

cannot be controlled. Some

children

may select terrible content ,

for example

, casino websites, or porn websites which is totally unbeneficial for them. In a nutshell, I strongly believe that

teachers

and schools are still necessary for

children

,

while

computers and the

Internet

should be used in parallel under the supervision of

teachers

or adults who are able to advise them to use technology in a valid way for their most effective

study

.