Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

Some folks assume that the administrative authorities are responsible for the soaring of overweight in the young generation,

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, there is some notion which the source of

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drawback is the

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both views ,

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I personally believe both of them have an important position. On the one hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that the

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has a decisive factor

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increasing the number of children who have

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overweight.

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of the important cause for growing

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problem is

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physical

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and outdoor activities

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young people. They insist that if the

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provide enough amenities for

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activity, the majority of

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generation will encourage to use

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.

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, it is

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beneficial for dropping the overweight of them because in that case children

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of staying at home and surfing

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the internet or social media,

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would rather go out and burn their

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calories

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, many commentators justifiably argue that we are unable to not consider the several effects of

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issue.

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research, more than 90% of food

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consumption

which children eat provides at home.

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if these

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healthy with

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amount

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of sugar, fat or sodium, the amount of obesity decline dramatically in the long run

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among

the young generation.

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, the

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are able to calculate

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caleries

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calories

of the body burn in daily activities and

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they cover just that amount with

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healthy food and not more than needed. In conclusion, It

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to me both

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and

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have a particular effect

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happening. The

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should provide enough facilities for

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, the

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must cook enough food with healthy products.