the bar chart shows the scores of teams A,B AND C over four different seasons . summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words.

the bar chart shows the scores of teams A,B AND C over four different seasons . summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words.
This
provided bar chart illustrates the results of three different teams, A,
B
, and C for four consecutive seasons. The number of
points
is used as a measure to assess the
score
of each club.
Overall
, it can be seen that
team
B
scored far higher than the other two teams, though its record dropped as a whole over the period. At the beginning of the period, in 2002, the mark of
Team
B
far exceeded that of the others which was around 8 times
Team
C‘s
points
and more than 16 times
Team
A’S
score
. In the next year, in 2003, the patterns of the
points
changed noticeably. The
points
of
Team
B
declined to 60,
whereas
the grade of
Team
A rose to just over twice. In the following season, in 2004, the
score
of
Team
B
declined to around half at 43 compared to its
score
, in 2002, and the results of the two teams A and
B
became nearly similar. In the final year, in 2005, in spite of a decline in the scores of
Team
B
in comparison to its previous
points
, there was a minor increase to 55
points
, and it remained ahead of the others.
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