the chart below shows the number of households in the us by their annual income in 2007, 2011,2015
The bar chart provides information about the number of
families
in the united
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United
stats
according to their yearly income in three specific years measured by Correct your spelling
states
millions
.
Overall
, it is clear that
the the
number of households who earn 100,000 $ or more was the highest over the given period, Remove the redundancy
apply
whereas
families
who earn 75,000 to 99,999 $ was
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were
lowest
.
Looking Correct article usage
the lowest
in
the graph in more detail, in 2007, the number of Change preposition
at
families
who earn who earn
100,000 $ or more was around 29 Remove the redundancy
apply
millions
, and in 2011 was slightly declined to almost Change to singular
million
to
27 Change preposition
apply
millions
and in 2015 Change to singular
million
want
up to approximately Correct your spelling
went
to
33 Change preposition
apply
million
. In contrast
, families
who earn
less than 25,000 $ in 2007 was 25 Wrong verb form
earned
millions
and in increase to almost 29 Change to singular
million
million
and after that in 2015 showed little droped
to about 26 Correct your spelling
dropped
million
.
Regarding others
categories of income, Correct quantifier usage
other
families
who acquire 75,000 to 99,999 $ approximately remain constant during the given period almost 15 million
. Similarity
, households who earn 50,000 to 74,999 $ unchanged over from 2007 to 2015 Replace the word
Similarly
was
around 21 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
million
. Families
who earn 25,000 to 49,999 $ in 2007 were around 26 million
and then
showed small
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a small
increased
to 29 Replace the word
increase
million
and then
want
up to almost 27 Correct your spelling
went
million
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