These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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No doubt , Technology plays a wide role in today's world

however

, some say that online education is a better

way

whereas

opponents think that offline classes are good .In

this

essay I will briefly explain both viewpoints

along with

examples

while

I stand with the latter opinion as physically attending lectures is the best method to pay attention to college classes . To commence with the former's side that nowadays a number of students love to take internet-based subjects so that they can

study

at home with their Macbook,laptop and mobile.Needless to ,say

this

is the best

way

to gain knowledge and stay in front of their Parents.

Moreover

, they can

study

abroad in any country

while

sitting at home by

this

they can save their money and stay with their Parents.

Besides

this

, they can

also

do part-time jobs,

for example

, in some countries, parents or elder people cannot allow doing

further

study

for girls ,

thus

this

internet Service they can continue their studies and stay at the house as well . On the other side online

class

is not good because physically they can experience and enjoy their every lecture with their friends . First and foremost teachers can

also

clear the problems with efficiently in offline mode and by being regular in

class

, they can increase their network and friends cycle as well .

Additionally

,in University the

study

environment is already made in the

class

and with group decisions they can easily clear their doubts

furthermore

, they can clear their issue from the library and after

class

with their teacher which is not possible in an online

way

. In conclusion ,

although

Online is not a bad

way

to enhance knowledge and be continues with their

study

nonetheless

, offline is a wonderful

way

to stay connected with friends and teachers

as well as

they can learn communication skills.

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3Word repetition
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These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Fully explain your ideas

These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this? How could more people be encouraged to come into the teaching profession?

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