You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear __________
r Sir/Madam ,
I hope you will find
this
letter in good health . I am writing this
letter to you because I want to let you know that I received an envelope sent by you but my bank
card
is missing from it .
Furthermore
, I got the envelope yesterday morning in front of my door but it was unsealed . I was shocked when I saw there was no bank
card
so I immediately went to my nearby bank
but nobody took it seriously and I had to come back home empty .
Moreover
, I am really very worried now because this
card
is attached to my bank
account and someone who stole my card
can withdraw money from my bank
and can commit any fraud .I hope after reading my letter you and your staff will try to do something to solve this
issue . I will be waiting for your response .
Yours faithfully
Jaspreet KaurSubmitted by jass.sekhon4693 on
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coherence cohesion
To enhance logical structure, ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and that these ideas are connected smoothly. For instance, mention how the envelope was unsealed and the missing card more clearly in different sections.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to ensure each paragraph sticks to a single idea and transition smoothly to the next idea. This will improve the reader's understanding and coherence.
task achievement
For a complete response, explicitly request specific actions or clarifications from the bank, such as issuing a new card immediately or investigating the issue.
task achievement
To achieve a more suitable writing tone, consider being a little more formal and polite, especially towards the end, when making requests or expressing concerns.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing were appropriately used, creating a polite and respectful tone.
task achievement
The letter effectively communicates the issue and expresses concerns about the missing card in a clear manner.