Task 1: The flow chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.
The flow chart shows how waste
paper
is recycled in several steps.
Overall
, there are six distinct stages involved in this
process, beginning with the initial collection of waste paper
to the eventual production of the new paper
.
In the first stages of the paper
recycling process, the waste paper
is collected by volunteers from public paper
banks or simply given by the business. Then
, the collections are sorted because not all of them are suitable for recycling. Next,
the graded paper
is transported to a paper
mill.
Stages four and five, involve cleaning. Firstly
, the paper
is cleaned, pulped, and separated from stuck foreign objects such
as staples and any other foreign materials. Secondly
, all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper
at the de-inking stage. Finally
, the pulp is processed in a paper
machine able to most of the time successfully create the end product: usable paper
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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