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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles others think there are other better ways . Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, increasing
road
 traffic and
saftey
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safety
 concerns
has
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 become an extremely relevant topic of debate. Some
people
 hold the opinion that putting up speeding bars can minimize hazards on the
road
,
while
 others feel there can be additional ways to curb
road
 accidents and related happenings.
This
 essay envisages
to discuss
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discussing
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 both
the
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viewpoints
along with
 my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, putting a maximum
capping
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 on the speed limit contributes to safe travel on the roads and highways by minimizing the chances of
crash
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crashes
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 and
collision
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collisions
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. Usually, when an individual is over-speeding, there is a greater possibility of major accidents as it gets difficult to control the speed
last
 minute.
For instance
, a report from Kenya mentions that 90% of
road
 accidents happen
due to
over speeding
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overspeeding
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.
Furthermore
,
road
 rash often causes wear and tear and deteriorates the surface of the
road
. The more vehicles
drive
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at in
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in
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at
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inapproproate
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inappropriate
appropriate
 speed,
road
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the road
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 infrastructure worsens and proves detrimental to the driver
as well as
country's
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the country's
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 financial state.
However
, on the other side, certainly, there are different more ways in which one can ensure safe
drive
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driving
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 and travel. Multiplying the penalty
of
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for
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 not adhering to the driving rules is one way that can motivate
people
 to
drive
in
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within
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 their limits.
Apart from
this
,
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the licening
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licening
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licencing
licensing
authority
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authorities
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 can put strict regulations
while
 issuing new
drivers'
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driver's
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license
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licenses
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. In fact,
this
 will directly ooze out
negligient
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negligent
 drivers from the way and only competent and serious
people
 would be able to
drive
 on
road
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the road
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.
As a result
, mishappenings can be reduced. It has been observed that in Canada that the driving test is a
gerculean
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herculean
 task for
people
 and they're not able to make it
in
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on
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first
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the first
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 attempt,
therefore
, they tend to practice more until they
drive
safe
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safely
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.
To conclude
,
licening
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licensing
licencing
 authorities and
road
 rules in a country should be monitored in a way that
it
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does not hamper the lives of
people
 but at the same time, makes everyone feel safe.
Additionally
, there can be proper timely check-ins time and again to revise and alter the rules as and when required.
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