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the diagram belows shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years

the diagram belows shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years
#belows #floor #plan #library #years
The two maps
illustrates
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illustrate
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 how the floor plan of a public library
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has
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change
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changed
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 over 20 years until
present
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the present
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.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 there
are
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have been
a
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apply
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considerable
change
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changes
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 including,
introduce
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introducing
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lecture
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lectures
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 and competure
croom
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rooms
,café,
and
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apply
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self-service , and
infomration
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information
desk
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desks
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 and reference
books
 . Looking
to
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at
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two
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the two
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 maps in more detail , in
top
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the top
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 left
corner
 the CDs, videos,
computer
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and computer
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 games have been
expand
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expanding
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 and changed into storytelling, two
sofa
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sofas
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, and
children
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children's
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ficition
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fiction
books
. In the top right
corner
children
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children's
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books
 have been replaced
to
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in
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lecture
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the lecture
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 room. In the
middle
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,middle
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 the tables and
charies
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charities
chairs
 have been removed. In
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the center
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centre
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center
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,center
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 left adult fiction
books
 have been relocated to the right
center
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centre
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 and all reference
books
 have been
puted
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put
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 in
left
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the left
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center
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centre
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. In the bottom
corner
 left the reading room
have
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has
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 been converted into
computer
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the computer
a computer
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 the doors changed to open in the direction of
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the enterance
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enterance
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entrance
. In
bottom
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the bottom
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 of
entrance
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the entrance
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 have unchanged. In
bottom
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the bottom
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corner
 left enquiry dest have been made into
café
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the café
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 and the door
on
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apply
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the
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apply
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open in the direction of
enterance
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entrance
. In the
center
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centre
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 left adult non-fiction
books
 have been redeveloped
to
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into
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 adult fiction
books
, information
dest
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desk
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, and three self-service machines.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, corner, center with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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