The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditure of a children’s charity in the USA in one year.

The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditure of a children’s charity in the USA in one year.
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The pie charts illustrate the income and outcome of a USA donation to kids in one period.
Overall
, a glance at the picture provided reveals that the revenue was slightly higher than expense, and the donated food and program services were dominated in each
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. Based on the pie chart, the funding of donors to the charity reached
until
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53,5 million dollars, in which
the
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food donation became the majority among all sources of earnings at above four-fifth during the period. It is followed by contributions to community and program revenue at one in ten and just over 2% respectively.
Furthermore
, the other income contributed small portions at 0,4%,
while
investment income and government grants had similar percentages at 0,2% throughout the year.
According to
the figure, the expenditures of charity
also
showed a significant number with more than 53,2 million
dollar
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, which was just under the opposite. The services of
program
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had the highest proportions in one year with over 90%,
while
the contribution of fundraising and management and general reached only between 1% and 3%.
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