The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditure of a children’s charity in the USA in one year.
The pie charts illustrate the income and outcome of a USA donation to kids in one period.
Overall
, a glance at the picture provided reveals that the revenue was slightly higher than expense, and the donated food and program services were dominated in each categories
.
Based on the pie chart, the funding of donors to the charity reached Change to a singular noun
category
until
53,5 million dollars, in which Change preposition
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the
food donation became the majority among all sources of earnings at above four-fifth during the period. It is followed by contributions to community and program revenue at one in ten and just over 2% respectively. Correct article usage
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Furthermore
, the other income contributed small portions at 0,4%, while
investment income and government grants had similar percentages at 0,2% throughout the year.
According to
the figure, the expenditures of charity also
showed a significant number with more than 53,2 million dollar
, which was just under the opposite. The services of Change to a plural noun
dollars
program
had the highest proportions in one year with over 90%, Add an article
the program
while
the contribution of fundraising and management and general reached only between 1% and 3%.Submitted by dimasfajarairlangga on
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