Your friend has had his/her first book published a few days ago. He/she has recently sent you a copy of that book. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, - Congratulate him/her for having his/her first book published - Thank your friend for sending you a copy of the book - say what do you think about the book

Dear Mike, I'm so happy that you have published your novel

last

week. Congratulations ! I know how much effort you've used into

this

book and always trusted you'll find a publishing company that will sponsor your writing. After taking a glimpse at it, I'm sure it'll skyrocket the bookstore shelves. Thanks for sending me a copy. It arrived the day before yesterday. Liked the red covering and the reading mark is so cool. Best part you have mentioned me on your dedication page thanks a lot mate ! supporting you is just something I love doing. As for the writing you did. What an amazing story ! Loved how you mixed and matched thrill with comedy, it must've been very hard to do so. but , don't be mad at me, I wished if you had written the ending differently. Didn't like the bad guy who won

at the end

Besides

that, It was astonishing. Looking forward to reading the next part. Best regards, John

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