The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the  information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates a public library’s floor plan 20 years ago and now.
Overall
, the library remained the same size and had
one
entrance,
however
, a new
room
was added to today’s floor plan to become four rooms
instead
of three. 20 years ago, the library consisted of 3 rooms,
one
for Children’s
books
, another for CDs,Videos and computer games, and the
last
was a reading
room
for magazines and newspapers.
Moreover
, behind the entrance, there were chairs and tables.
In addition
, there was an enquiry desk for tickets and book returns. There were two adult zones,
one
for non-fiction
books
and the other for fiction
books
. Nowadays, on the right side along the entrance, there is a cafe.
Whereas
, on the opposite ,side there is a computer
room
. The
room
which used to be for children’s
books
, now it is a lecture
room
.
Moreover
, the Computer games
room
turned
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into children’s fiction
books
and it
set
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up especially for storytelling events,
also
it contains two sofas.
Furthermore
, in the area between the lecture
room
and the cafe, there are three zones,
one
for an information desk, the other for a self-service machine and the
last
for the adult fiction
books
zone. On the opposite side, there are all-reference
books
.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words one, room, books with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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