The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates a public library’s floor plan 20 years ago and now.
Overall
, the library remained the same size and had one
entrance, however
, a new room
was added to today’s floor plan to become four rooms instead
of three.
20 years ago, the library consisted of 3 rooms, one
for Children’s books
, another for CDs,Videos and computer games, and the last
was a reading room
for magazines and newspapers. Moreover
, behind the entrance, there were chairs and tables.In addition
, there was an enquiry desk for tickets and book returns. There were two adult zones, one
for non-fiction books
and the other for fiction books
.
Nowadays, on the right side along the entrance, there is a cafe. Whereas
, on the opposite ,side there is a computer room
. The room
which used to be for children’s books
, now it is a lecture room
. Moreover
, the Computer games room
turned
into children’s fiction Add a missing verb
was turned
books
and it set
up especially for storytelling events, Add a missing verb
was set
also
it contains two sofas. Furthermore
, in the area between the lecture room
and the cafe, there are three zones, one
for an information desk, the other for a self-service machine and the last
for the adult fiction books
zone. On the opposite side, there are all-reference books
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