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You are planning a trip to Australia during the Spring Festival and you want to invite an old friend of yours to join your trip. Write to your friend on the matter. In your letter: - Explain where and when you want to go, - Give details of the travel, dates, and costs involved, - Describe some of the things you want to do.

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Dear Jane, I hope you’re well. I’m writing to invite you to travel to Australia with me
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 April. Do you still remember my cousin ,Sue? The sister you saw
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 summer when she came to my house for a visit. She asked me to go to her house for a stay in Sydney
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 Spring, and I’m going to take a trip from April 15th to 30th. We will take a plane from Ottawa on the 15th and arrive in Sydney on the 16th. I’ve asked the airline company that a returned ticket costs $1,500. As for accommodation and transportation, Sue said that we could stay at her apartment, and she could be our tour guide and driver too, so we will just need to prepare around $2,000 for pocket money. There will be endless things to see and do there. We will spend the first week at the Spring Festival.
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, it will take us a couple of days to discover the city. I can’t wait to see the Sydney Opera House in my eyes. If we still have time, I want to go to Blue Mountain and Byron Bay which are in the suburbs. I will be cheerful if you can come along. I’m sure we’ll have a great time. Best regards, Maria

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task response
Ensure that the letter fully addresses the task prompt, including all the required points in detail.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the ideas and information in a more coherent and connected manner, using appropriate transition words and phrasing.
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