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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...,

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Dear Auntie Jane, It has been a long time since I saw you. Hope you and Uncle John are doing well. I have some exciting news. I will be in
Sydney
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 soon and I'm so happy to be able to visit you guys as I've missed both of you. I will be in
Sydney
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 during my university term break which is for 2 weeks. I was
wonderinf
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wondering
 if I could stay at your house for the duration of the trip as a hotel is going to be really expensive. Don't worry about food, I will be out of the house most days as I have other friends living in
Sydney
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 whom I have not seen in a long time.
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, I will
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 gladly pay for rent as I understand how high the cost of living is especially in
Sydney
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. I will be really
greatful
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grateful
 if you could host me for
this
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 trip. It's okay if your house isn't ready for
visit
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a visit
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. I would book a hotel nearby so that it would be convenient for us to
cist
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visit
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 each other. It would be nice to see you again, we have lots to catch up on. Lots of love, Joscelin

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Ensure consistent spelling, such as 'wondering' instead of 'wonderinf'.
coherence cohesion
Consider organizing your thoughts into distinct paragraphs for clarity.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are warm and appropriate for writing to a relative.
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The tone of the letter is friendly and respectful.
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