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Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions.

#cities #world #people
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young
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 generation
have
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 some
issues
 when they live in developed
cities
.
This
 can be attributed to several consequences, which can require possible
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 to be adopted There are many problems resulting from setting down in major
cities
. One obvious issue is
high
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 cost. To be more precise,
people
 who live in big
cities
 have to
spent
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a
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 amount of money to pay costs, and these are not at a lower price.
For instance
, there are some youngsters that want to move
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 big
cities
 for their
study
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studies
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 or job, so
a
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 first condition is that they need to have enough money to cover their life.
Consequently
, young
people
 will have
a
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pressure if they want to live
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cities
. Another problem worth mentioning is
a
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competition. Living in big
cities
where
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 have the most
competitive
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 in every
fields
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field
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 requires
people
have
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to try their best
ton
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to
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 achieve goals.
Thus
, they can
survice
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survive
service
 in
cities
where
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that
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 have
a
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fast growth. Various measures,
nevertheless
, can be implemented to address these
issues
. The first solution is
that
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individual’s
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individual
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 improvement.
This
 arises from the fact that
people
 who
are
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study
 or work in
cities
centre
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centres
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,
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 so that they have to find a method to
study
 well and work hard to improve
theirselves
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themselves
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.
This
 brings
people
opporturnities
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opportunities
 to have a better life in big
cities
.
Therefor
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Therefore
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,
this
 can assist them to stay in and decrease some problems that they have to face
everyday
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. Another approach is
a
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positive thought. Mainly because once
people
 think
positive
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positively
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, they can solve
issues
 easily.
Besides
,
this
 will boost young
people
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people's
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 energy to keep
study
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studying
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 and
work
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working
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, which
help
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helps
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 them overcome difficulties. In conclusion, despite living in increased
cities
 can raise
to
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many
issues
, steps can be taken to alleviate the situation.
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