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The charts show the sources of electricity produced 4 countries between 2003 and 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featuras. and make comparisons where comparisons where relevant

The charts show the sources of electricity produced 4 countries between 2003 and 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featuras. and make comparisons where comparisons where relevant
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The chart illustrates the
production
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 of
electricity
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 in four countries between the time period
of
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2003 and 2008.
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, we can identify that more than two-thirds of Morocco's source of
electricity
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 derives from Hydropower,
whereas
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 India and Vietnam's largest source comes from fossil fuels. After analyzing in close detail, hydropower is the largest source of Morrco's
electricity
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production
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, which constitutes 95% of its
production
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, followed by Sweden's
production
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 of hydropower which accounts for more than half of its
electricity
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 sources. In terms of fossil fuel
production
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, India has the highest proportion of fossil fuel
production
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,
while
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 the remaining 18% is focused on other sources of
electricity
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, electricity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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