Some people say that experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experience as teenagers, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

While

some people believe that an offspring's experiences prior to their school time

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the most influential to their future

life

, others think that teenage experiences at school are more crucial. In

this

essay, I will give point my of view and opinion on

this

affair.

To begin

with, a child's daily

life

experience is very important. That's because the structure of the human

brain

is built during the first years of

life

as a child develops rapid

brain

connections through everyday experiences.

In addition

, different areas of our

brain

are responsible for different abilities,

such

as emotions, language, movement, etc.

Thus

, neural connections determine a child's temperament.

Besides

, our

brain

's skills decrease dramatically as it matures and interacts with more complex situations and

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ground.

Therefore

, the early years of

life

are especially important to support emotional, social and cognitive abilities and

thus

shape adult

life

.

On the other hand

, the teenage experience plays its part in the establishment of a person’s fundamental ideologies. When children enter their teenage years, their cognizance has reached a new level of maturity,

thus

allowing them to acquire inputs from the surrounding environment more proactively.

Also

joining

this

process of ideological development is teenagers’ interaction with a multitude of ideas and viewpoints from numerous people and communities, which forces them to face the dilemma of choice when opting for what beliefs to adhere to. Their choices at

this

critical moment will gradually construct the set of world views and ideologies as guidance for teenagers’ future-

life

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. A case in point can be seen in teenagers’ career choices. In their childhood, they may take a liking to a certain job just

due to

its so-called “fancy” reputation.

However

, once a teenager, they will be presented with more complex factors, both internal and external,

such

as self-capabilities or world trends,

thus

a possible switch in career orientation ensuing. All things considered, proponents from both sides have their own grounds

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their arguments. From my standpoint, both childhood and teenage times are of equal importance to a person’s future

life

, shifting the primary issue now to building up a proper childhood and teenage environment for the sake of optimal personal development