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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important.

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These days people
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 control of their health by adjusting their diet and others use more physical activity because exercise is beneficial. People have different views regarding the question of how to dietary
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health. To my
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This
 essay will discuss both viewpoints and provide inferences as to why a balanced meal should be given more importance.
To begin
 with, the more people walk in the fresh
air
 and do physical
exercises
, the more their mind and body can benefit from the fresh
air
, because scientists
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 that fresh
air
 is the best medicine.
therefore
, if a
person
 always and every morning does physical
exercises
 in the fresh
air
, he will never get sick. If he does physical education and physical
exercises
, he will not get sick and will be refreshed all day long.
Nevertheless
, a balanced diet consisting of proportionate carbohydrates and proteins has always been a shortcut to good health because these practices have been followed since ancient times when cardio activities like aerobics,
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 yoga were not known. In the fact that physical activity helps when a
person
 consumes healthy food. if a
person
 does not eat
healthy
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, no matter how much he
exercises
, it will not help him. Because healthy food hygiene is one of the characteristics of a
person
. In conclusion, in order to maintain a balanced life, both nutritious food and physical exercise should be carried out at the same time. Because these two are the same, they go side by side.
However
, a slight priority must be given to one's diet, so that she can build her physique to challenge any type of physical work. Word count: 278
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