some people want government to spend money on life on other planets, however, others think it is a waste of public money when the earth has so many problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued that fund which is being allocated from the public in order to spend on human survival needs to invest in other planets, but
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other people's point of ,view it should be spent on our current living as there are many obstacles we are facing on our present
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. I believe that the adequate use of money is to invest it to tackle the
earth
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's problems.
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with, people who hold opinions about financial use on the other asteroids are considering the consequences of coming years
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the current situation of the
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. The fact is that our
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is becoming worse
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human carelessness as they are adopting habits which are detrimental to our
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. Private vehicles,
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, exacerbate our environment by emitting harmful gases which might be convenient for humans to travel from one place to another but spoil our environment.
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, current living
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conditions will no longer exist to live and we have to migrate to another
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to survive.
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, some societies are arguing why we allow our money to invest in other globes if we still preserve our motherland by implementing some laws and using our finance to solve current problems. To explain it, some believe that government should give attention towards halting pollution problems by spending money on awareness seminars
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building some public transport stations in slum areas to reduce pollution which is catastrophic for our natural nature.
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way,
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, we might reduce the chance of pollution in the environment and our
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could exist for many years to survive.
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some public thinks that investment should be for finding life on other planets, we may not neglect our motherland's preservation. So, I believe that our
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's safety is our first priority and we should let our government spend the required amount of funds on our current
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • space exploration
  • extraterrestrial
  • terrestrial issues
  • poverty alleviation
  • sustainable
  • philosophical advancement
  • ethics
  • biological diversity
  • technological breakthroughs
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