Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Yearly, many
languages
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extinct
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. Some individuals believe that
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would be crucial to make life easier if people
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fewer
languages
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in the world. In the following essay, I will discuss why I would disagree with the statement. If a particular
language
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die
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out or
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is about to extinct. It is not only might be a shame for the nation but
also
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the
culture
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within the
language
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itself would die. Every
language
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carries an ancient
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, which formed
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over
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several decades or even thousands of years.
For example
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, in
Iran
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some of the
languages
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are dying out
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in rural areas. The reason
to
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that might be, Presently, a massive migration from rural to urban areas
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taking place.
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younger generation would prefer to use the
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that would be desirable for
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society.
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result
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the
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as well as
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the
language
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in the area would die out and
that is
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to blame for a nation.
However
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, Some individuals argue that in order to facilitate the process of human life, dying out of
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might be an important step to
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this
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become a reality. it helps people to speak in the same
language
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and understand it.
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, consider a situation where a country like Saudi Arabia adopted Persian as an official
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this
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would potentially
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alleviate tension and conflict the
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Iran
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and Saudi Arabia.
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, In my
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this
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is not true and it is because the two
country
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countries
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of
south
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Korea and north
korea
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Korea
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speak
in
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the same
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.
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,
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the tension
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between these two countries remained intact. In conclusion, if a certain
language
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die
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dies
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out, the embedded
culture
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within that
language
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would die out as well.
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However
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some people believe that
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restriction would help
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countries to reduce tension, in my
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this
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would not be the case.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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