Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Yearly, many
languages
extinct
. Some individuals believe that Add a missing verb
are extinct
this phenomena
would be crucial to make life easier if people Change the determiner
this phenomenon
these phenomena
uses
fewer Change the verb form
use
languages
in the world. In the following essay, I will discuss why I would disagree with the statement.
If a particular language
die
out or Correct subject-verb agreement
dies
it
is about to extinct. It is not only might be a shame for the nation but Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
the culture
within the language
itself would die. Every language
carries an ancient culture
, which formed through
several decades or even thousands of years. Change preposition
over
For example
, in Iran
some of the Add a comma
,Iran
languages
are dying out specially
in rural areas. The reason Replace the word
especially
to
that might be, Presently, a massive migration from rural to urban areas Change preposition
for
are
taking place. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Therefore
younger generation would prefer to use the language
that would be desirable for the
society. Correct article usage
apply
As a
result
the Add a comma
,result
culture
as well as
the language
in the area would die out and that is
to blame for a nation.
However
, Some individuals argue that in order to facilitate the process of human life, dying out of languages
might be an important step to make
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making
this
become a reality. it helps people to speak in the same language
and understand it. For instance
, consider a situation where a country like Saudi Arabia adopted Persian as an official language
this
would potentially helps
alleviate tension and conflict the Change the verb form
help
iran
and Saudi Arabia. Change the capitalization
Iran
However
, In my opinion
Add a comma
,opinion
this
is not true and it is because the two country
of Fix the agreement mistake
countries
south
Korea and north Correct your spelling
South
korea
speak Change the capitalization
Korea
in
the same Change preposition
apply
language
. However
, tension
between these two countries remained intact.
In conclusion, if a certain Add an article
the tension
language
die
out, the embedded Change the verb form
dies
culture
within that language
would die out as well. However
some people believe that Add a comma
,However
language
restriction would help to
countries to reduce tension, in my Change preposition
apply
opinion
Add the comma(s)
,opinion
this
would not be the case.Submitted by mohammad.saffarian on
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