In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

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are motivated to go to work or travel before starting their university

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in some countries, as

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gives

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to apply practical

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and gain more experience in the

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creates a gap between

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, because once they started to earn

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people

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may get distracted

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continuing their higher

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, they focus more on earning much more. Nowadays

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often prefer to finish a double degree before joining any job in their

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. Having said that, before continuing with higher

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most of the students choose to take a break from

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and join to work to gain some practical

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as it helps them in understanding their

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pursuing higher

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, Professional course

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as chartered accountant has internships of one year compulsory as part of their syllabus, so students must have a year of work experience in any firm to complete the course.

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, even though

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gives

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practical

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but

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of

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would like to stay on the job as they earn

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and can fulfil their own financial needs.

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, on a yearly ,basis many corporates recruit interns on a contract basis, but over a period of

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the company bargain them for permanent role by providing attractive pay.

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deviates the individual to earn

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of continuing their

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. In conclusion,

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young

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are motivated to take a break from

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to gain realistic experience in their

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by operating and executing their theoretical

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simultaneously, they can

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make some

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to fulfil their current financial needs which leads to getting deviated from attaining a higher degree.