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Disposing of waste on streets has become a common problem in many countries these days. What are the cause and solutions of this issue?

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Nowadays,
waste
 disposal on streets is a common issue in lots of countries.
This
 essay will illustrate the main reasons that result in
this
 problem and how to solve it. At the outset,various factors are considered the cornerstones that lead to
this
 dilemma; so, we will mention the most important ones.
Firstly
, most teenagers prefer eating fast
food
 like KFC, or Macdonlis, but after finishing, they will throw the rest of the
food
, plastic bags, and empty Cola bottles in the street.
Consequently
, the remaining
food
 will attract street animals
such
 as dogs and cats;
hence
, it will make their stool on the roads, which could worsen the condition.
Secondly
, the government does not make a clear plan to ensure the cleanliness of the environment; because there are no certain employees to prohibit the occurrence of
this
 problem. Some solutions should be suggested to avoid
this
 bad habit in our societies. If parents talk to their children about the negative consequences of putting
waste
 on the streets, sure
this
 will prevent
this
 issue to happen.
In addition
 to that, fast
food
 restaurants should put some rubbish baskets, and youth should be informed to throw any
waste
 inside it, or they will be fined by the authority, if they leave the
waste
 on the street.
Moreover
, the government should make a lot of seminars and campaigns to increase people's awareness about
this
 serious topic. On top of that, the nation's guardians should create rules and laws to induce folk to keep their habitat clean. In conclusion, if the authority and all members of society cooperate, they will get rid of
this
 problem completely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inadequate provision
  • waste bins
  • public areas
  • accumulation
  • public awareness
  • environmental and health implications
  • strict regulations
  • penalties
  • littering
  • infrastructure
  • regular waste collection
  • public education campaigns
  • responsible waste management
  • implementing stricter penalties
  • community service
  • adherence
  • compliance
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