You have lost something on a bus and called customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: · describe the item you lost · explain why you weren't happy with the customer service · say what action you would like the company to take.

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Dear Sir I am writing
this
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letter regarding a matter which concerns me significantly.Recently, I travelled on a bus registered with your company and ,
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however
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I lost my shoulder
bag
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.It is a brown leather
bag
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with 2 vertical stripes on the front.
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,it is in pretty decent condition. I decided to take assistance from your customer service,
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,they were derelict.Later they not only stopped responding to my calls but
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were uncooperative.
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,they said it was my fault in the first place. I request you to look into
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problem as that
bag
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is a crucial asset for me.It has pivotal documents regarding my educational background.
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,kindly take imperative steps to improve your services so that
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can be avoided in future.I look forward to hearing from you about my
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. Thank you in anticipation Your's Faithfully Ahmad Hassan Nadeem
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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