The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1900s

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1900s
The bar pie chart depicts the major reason of what are
causes
of worldwide
land
degradation
and impacting on agricultural
land
which becomes less productive. The table illustrates the proportion of these three major reasons
land
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for land
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degradation
in 3 different countries during the 1990s.
Overall
the proportion of 3 major
causes
(over-grazing, deforestation, and over-cultivation) was around one third with only 7% of it being other
causes
. In 3 different countries, the percentage differs for each
causes
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cause
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. Europe is the one having the most
land
degraded about 23%, more than two-fifths compared to Oceania, and above one-fourth compared with North America. The main
causes
land
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of land
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degradation
in North America was over-cultivation,
while
in Europe is deforestation,
on the other hand
of these 2 countries, Oceania's major reason for
land
degradation
is overgrazing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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