These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, many fathers stay at home and
on the contrary
, many mothers go out to work. Linking Words
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could be related to the distribution of tasks in modern families. Formerly, Linking Words
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and it was the man who always went to work. I think that it is a positive development.
Referring to the organization of the schedule, many marriages prefer to distribute the tasks of the house, in Linking Words
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way, they gain either more time or more money. More time can be saved, Linking Words
for example
, if the father, Linking Words
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he is at home, takes care of showering or giving dinner to the children and can put them to bed earlier to have more time with his wife after work. Linking Words
On the other hand
, it can be done to earn more money, making the person who earns more money of the two go to a job and the other stay at home and in Linking Words
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way avoid paying a salary to a person to do household chores. It is a great way to save wealth.
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is a very positive thing because apart from the benefits that I have already mentioned, Linking Words
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can help life as a couple since it improves communication between the two components of the marriage. In fact, Linking Words
according to
a study by the University of Oklahoma, 80% of couples that invert their roles, Linking Words
last
at least 15 more years. It Linking Words
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breaks the repetition of days and the typical routines of conventional marriages, which makes each day get out of the routine. Linking Words
Finally
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help children have a closer relationship with their father, which a few years ago was more difficult.
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To conclude
, these non-conventional roles have many advantages Linking Words
such
as saving wealth, gaining a lifetime and improving the relationship with your partner and children.Linking Words
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